my writing- baby carrier

This piece of writing shows.....
 That I am able to use clauses and connectives in my writing.
I believe I am at ....
relational because I know where to put clauses correctly but I still need to seek feedback.
my next step is to seek feedback to become extended abstract.

Here is one paragraph of my writing :

Baby carrier

In the last example, there is a company selling fake, as well as, defective baby carriers. The clip easily comes apart, and if a baby was in the carrier, it could be badly hurt. As a result of this the real company could be effected because people might think the real ones are fake too.

My maths- model and solve linear equations

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lVxDtJTUX3Q

HWC- interview

Here is part of my interview I did on Rachel about nursing.

Name: Rachel Brennan

Occupation: Nurse

Place of work: Moorehouse medical centre

1. What do you do on a daily basis?

 I mainly work in triage.

Triage is for medical emergencies. It is the process of determining the severity of the situation and then placing the patient in order to be seen by the doctor and to receive treatment.

Each patient must be seen within ten minutes of arrival and we are alerted if this needs to be immediate.