My good learner strategy goal

My good learner strategy goal I have been focusing on for the last couple of weeks was giving feedback. What I have improved on is giving feedback I know this because I have been giving next steps. I have found this challenging because I find it hard to find a problem in people's work. My next step is to ask for feedback.

<iframe width="420" height="315" src="//www.youtube.com/embed/vyCcL_0nYCY" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> At the moment I think i can play ten guitars not very well because I am not very good at changing chords. I have really improved on keeping in time. My next step is get faster at changing chords espically between c and f.

Why school camps shouldn't be banned.

This paragraph is a paragraph out of my agument  about why school camps shouldn't be banned. This writing shows the use of connectives. For example I used I believe and from my experience. 

I believe school camps are great for getting to know your class better. When you're on school camps you spend a lot of time with your classmates. Some people might say that children can spend time with each other on the weekend but on camp they have fun doing once in an lifetime opportunities with there friends. From my experience you also get put in groups with people that you might not normally talk to this is a good thing it means you make new friends.

My Awesome Art Work!

 

I divided the different colours by using bold black lines. They made it very easy to identify the different shapes. 

I have done darker colours for the river and lighter colours for the sun. It creates impact. 

I used different tones in my river the most but i also used tones on my hills and sun. It makes the river stand out more.

I used a circle for the sun and wavy lines for the hills, river and streaks coming out of the sun. They are bold shapes they stand out.

I think my art work went really well, it went better than i thought it would. My next step is to make sure there are no white gaps that I haven't painted.