Thursday, 17 April 2014

My End of Term Reflection

The area of my learning that I have made the most progress on is my reading because I was a level for 4p at the begging of the year and I am now a level 5p. 

The area I most want to improve on next term is my writing because I think I need to have better ideas.

Friday, 11 April 2014

My short story

My goal was to include complex sentences by adding commas.
I have used this sample because it adds more detail to the sentence: I live in a small town, called Borehamwood, which is just out of London.

I was at work, starring out the window,daydreaming. I was daydreaming about my dream job. But what I didn't know was that later that week I was going to be offered it.

Hi my name is Indie, Indie Smith. At the moment, I work at a small hotel, in London. It's actually very busy for a hotel it's size. I am the receptionist there. I live in a small town, called Borehamwood, which is just out of London. In the future, I would love to become a wedding dress designer.

Caoimhe's awesome viedo

This video shows....
How kids under age can get hold of cigarettes easily.
The influence on the decisions were...
Peer persure.

Thursday, 3 April 2014

Making choices- Introduction

This piece of writing shows how I have been using connectives. 
For example I have used and, for example
You make important choices everyday! Some choices are difficult and some choices aren't, but it's important to make the right choices. If you don't make the right choices there are consequences. For example if your mum asks you to do something and you don't do it there are consequences.