My goal was to include complex sentences by adding commas.
I have used this sample because it adds more detail to the sentence: I live in a small town, called Borehamwood, which is just out of London.
I was at work, starring out the window,daydreaming. I was daydreaming about my dream job. But what I didn't know was that later that week I was going to be offered it.
Hi my name is Indie, Indie Smith. At the moment, I work at a small hotel, in London. It's actually very busy for a hotel it's size. I am the receptionist there. I live in a small town, called Borehamwood, which is just out of London. In the future, I would love to become a wedding dress designer.
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