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Peer mediation

 Recently, I have  been showing up on time for peer mediation and library on a friday. This week in the library i helped out mrs ward when the people who were meant to be on were at the winter tournament.

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My writing- a disscusion

This piece of writing shows ......

that I now know how tonuse my writing goal.

I believe I am at .....

relational beacuse I know where to put connectives and clauses. 

My next step is to .....

Seek feedback to become extend abstract.

Conclusion-

After considering all the sides of the disscuison, I personally believe that consumers have the most responsablitie. Consumers are usally 1 or 2 people, whereas businesses are a massive group meaning everyone relys on someone else, so they don't have as much responsabilitie. A second point would be that businesses don't always follow the fair trading act, resulting in the consumer having to fix it , meaning the consumer has more responasablitie. This is why I believe consumers have the most responsablitie. 

my writing- baby carrier

This piece of writing shows.....
 That I am able to use clauses and connectives in my writing.
I believe I am at ....
relational because I know where to put clauses correctly but I still need to seek feedback.
my next step is to seek feedback to become extended abstract.

Here is one paragraph of my writing :

Baby carrier

In the last example, there is a company selling fake, as well as, defective baby carriers. The clip easily comes apart, and if a baby was in the carrier, it could be badly hurt. As a result of this the real company could be effected because people might think the real ones are fake too.