my writing- baby carrier

This piece of writing shows.....
 That I am able to use clauses and connectives in my writing.
I believe I am at ....
relational because I know where to put clauses correctly but I still need to seek feedback.
my next step is to seek feedback to become extended abstract.

Here is one paragraph of my writing :

Baby carrier

In the last example, there is a company selling fake, as well as, defective baby carriers. The clip easily comes apart, and if a baby was in the carrier, it could be badly hurt. As a result of this the real company could be effected because people might think the real ones are fake too.

My maths- model and solve linear equations

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lVxDtJTUX3Q

HWC- interview

Here is part of my interview I did on Rachel about nursing.

Name: Rachel Brennan

Occupation: Nurse

Place of work: Moorehouse medical centre

1. What do you do on a daily basis?

 I mainly work in triage.

Triage is for medical emergencies. It is the process of determining the severity of the situation and then placing the patient in order to be seen by the doctor and to receive treatment.

Each patient must be seen within ten minutes of arrival and we are alerted if this needs to be immediate.

I can apply the drawing and painting techniques. I have used vanishing points. I am relational because Katie said so.

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My writing winston Churchill- childhood

My goal was to use clauses and connectives. 

This piece of writing shows that I know how to use connectives but I am still a bit unsure where to put clauses best. 

Childhood

Winston Churchill, was born on the 30th November 1874, to lord and lady Randolph Churchill ( his mothers real name is Jeannie Jerome.). Since Churchill's parents traveled extensively and had very busy social lives, little Winston spent most of his younger years with his nanny, Elizabeth Everest. He grew very fond of her. Winston Churchill went to Harrow school, St. George's school ascot and lastly he went to  the royal military academy at Sandhurst. 

Caoimhe's Mihi

http://audioboo.fm/boos/2160081-caoimhe-s-mihi 

This is my mihi, click the link above to hear it.

My End of Term Reflection

The area of my learning that I have made the most progress on is my reading because I was a level for 4p at the begging of the year and I am now a level 5p. 

The area I most want to improve on next term is my writing because I think I need to have better ideas.