my discovery- diy art

I am at Multistructural because I can make diy art but I need help.

My next step is to to become relational and be able to make diy art by myself.

I learnt that its better to paint outwards so it doesn't go wrong.

I was't careful enough last time so the paint got in the middle where it isnt meant to be

my discovery- diy art

I am at Multistructural because I can make diy art but I need help.

My next step is to to become relational and be able to make diy art by myself.

I learnt that its better to paint outwards so it doesn't go wrong.

I was't careful enough last time so the paint got in the middle where it isnt meant to be

reading- prove it

we had to identify the style of writing, the authors purpose and the word choice then put an overall statement. The piece of writing this text was descriptive which goes in the first box. It was to inform which goes in the second box. It also used technical words which goes in the 3 rd box. Everything was the same throuout the text. My overall statement was .... Overall this text is descriptive because it says specific things like tempretures, it uses technical words because it mKes it sound more detailed.

My career explanation writing

The group I am working in is the Punctuation group.

My career goal is to become a nurse. I want to become a nurse, because  I want to help sick and injured people. I enjoy meeting new people. Nurses have to deal with lots of different circumstances. They never know what to expect. Most graduates, normally get a job within 12 months. There's a shortage of experienced nurses in some areas such as aged care, primary care and mental health.

my maths video- WALT- understand mixed numbers

My goals update

One of my goals was to get better at algebra. So far this year I haven't done any but I'm keen to get better at it later on in the year. 

My other goal was to be a better role model, I have been being a better role model by showing up to my responsibilities on time.

Winter- poem

WINTER

Snow softly fell to the icy cold ground.

The city was covered in a great big white blanket.

It was so cold, I thought I was going to freeze to death.

The snow man waves at everyone who passes by.

Personfication

Alliteration

hyperbole

I used alliteration to make it flow better. I used a hyperbole to give a dramatic effect. I used personification to make the peom sound better.